This is a creative commenting game, and in order to work, we need to follow some basic rules:
- Start with the picture shown below.
- The first commenter writes a sentence about the next thing that would be seen if the image was ‘zoomed out’.
- The next commenter includes the first sentence (written by the first commenter) and then writes another sentence describing the next item that would be seen if further ‘zoomed out’.
- Continue commenting until the story can’t go any further.
- Please read through the previous comments before posting, so that the story flows well. Check out the comments section on Abbey’s blog to see how it works.
- Enjoy!
We would love it if our visitors joined in with this game 🙂
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For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair (top left corner) with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watches from an overhanging tree limb.
Hello Super Six Sevens-
Thanks for visiting our class blog and telling us about your favorite sweets. Chewy, sticky caramels sound delicious! We’d love to see the wrapper designs your class creates so please do share on your blog. Thank you for adding us to your blog roll–we are honored to be included. Would it be okay if we did the same?
We’ll check back soon to see how the zoom-out story unfolds.
Cheers,
Mrs. Rombach
http://mrsrombachreads.edublogs.org
Hi Mrs Rombach,
Thank you for stopping by and adding to our zoom out story!
You’ll have to try Fantales if you ever get the chance. There are a couple of different ways that you can eat them. Some people let them melt in their mouths, whilst others chew on them, which is when they get stuck in your teeth!
Please do add us to your blog roll. We are new to blogging, so we hope you don’t mind us adding your blog to ours.
Cheers,
Miss Andrews
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room.
For some weird reason, when i zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to catch a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bird bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watches from an overhanging tree limb. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.
I didn’t get to approve Rose’s comment before Priyana commented, so we’ll join these two together…
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.
But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumoed out the window and into the green lawn.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.
But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. In a bush next to the tree is a cat waiting for the right moment to climb the tree and catch a bird.
Jess and Genis posted responses before I could approve them. So, I have combined them, but I had to take out one of Jess’s sentences (sorry)…
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.
But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. In a bush next to the tree is a cat waiting for the right moment to climb the tree and catch a bird.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling and then it falls of and breaks its leg, the cats then the dog lets it go for some reason, then after a while it comes back with 3 other dogs, the cat looks worried…..
Ms.Andrews, how come I can’t post a text onto my site
Hi Praban,
I have to approve your posts / comments before it appears on your page. Your About Me page is now published 🙂
Miss Andrews
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling and then it falls of and breaks its leg, the cats then the dog lets it go for some reason, then after a while it comes back with 3 other dogs, the cat looks worried…..The cat let out a menacing growl and 3 other cats came from the window to assist their fellow friend, now it was an all out war between dogs and cats and a random mouse…Who will win??
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds.But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling and then it falls of and breaks its leg, the cats then the dog lets it go for some reason, then after a while it comes back with 3 other dogs, the cat looks worried…..The cat let out a menacing growl and 3 other cats came from the window to assist their fellow friend, now it was an all out war between dogs and cats and a random mouse…Who will win??But then the animals heard a noise and turned around,in came a flock of birds through the window and started singing.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds. But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling and then it falls of and breaks its leg, the cats then the dog lets it go for some reason, then after a while it comes back with 3 other dogs, the cat looks worried…..The cat let out a menacing growl and 3 other cats came from the window to assist their fellow friend, now it was an all out war between dogs and cats and a random mouse…Who will win?? But then the animals heard a noise and turned around, in came a flock of birds through the window and started singing. Watching upon all of this from above was little Adeline, who was sitting in her treehouse, petrified of the attacks below. All she wanted was to play her guitar.
For some weird reason, when I zoom out, I see a chair, top left corner, with a cat on it, trying to reach a table with a ball of yarn on it. Behind the cat is a window and a tiny bluebird fledgling is teetering on the sill, chattering away nervously at its mother watching from an overhanging tree limb. Pale-coloured curtains are tied up, letting in the sun’s rays through the open window. The walls are beige and an acoustic guitar is placed on a shiny black stand in the far right corner of the room. Behind the tree is a big, brown dog growling, ready to pounce and catch those birds. But, the Rottweiler is thankfully chained to a humongous oak tree. The birds fly off leaving the dog behind and staring at them. The dog then sees the cat which jumped out the window and into the green lawn. The Dog then growls at the cat and starts chasing after it. The cat jumps through the kitchen window and so does the dog. After a while of chasing around the cat jumps onto the brightly coloured chandelier hanging of the ceiling and then it falls of and breaks its leg, the cats then the dog lets it go for some reason, then after a while it comes back with 3 other dogs, the cat looks worried…..The cat let out a menacing growl and 3 other cats came from the window to assist their fellow friend, now it was an all out war between dogs and cats and a random mouse…Who will win?? But then the animals heard a noise and turned around, in came a flock of birds through the window and started singing. Watching upon all of this from above was little Adeline, who was sitting in her treehouse, petrified of the attacks below. All she wanted was to play her guitar. She started to play the guitar and all the animals fell asleep from the amazing music and Adeline started laughing.
That startled the animals and then all the animals come out side. BAM! Adeline opened her eyes and all the cats and all the dogs AND the birds. Yet mysteriously there is a random big red spot under the meteor